Skrivit en egen låttext - Kritik
Tjena, suttit och pillat lite med en låttext och blev precis klar.
Inspirerad av High on Life - Henok Achido.
Med andra ord är låten av den typen och funkar bra att lyssna på den med ett liknande beat till. :)
Vill mest veta om det är helt åt helvete eller om den är okej.
Har aldrig skrivit någon låt eller liknande förut.
Säkert flera stavfel och mängder med grammatiska fel.
Hur som helst här är den:
Forgotten love, by Goki.
I Rumble, I Stumble, I Crumble, I Tumble
My friends got ma' back,
Godbless them, Godbless them,
What would I be without them,
I wake up in the middle of the night,
hustling with my nightmares,
trying to fight them, no can do,
They are still there messing with my mind,
every night the same, I die, without nothing,
Because that's who I am, I'm nothing without my friends,
Life is pointless, can't do shit, can't do shit,
But who the fuck cares, everyone is so busy doing their shit,
Nothing can affect me anymore, neither drugs or alcohol,
Except Love, yes you heard me, love-e-e-e
The day you loose all your friends and family,
It's time to say goo'bye, It's time to say goo'bye,
Yes you heard me, goo'bye, goo'bye,
Except Love, yes you heard me, love-e-e-e
The day you loose all your friends and family,
It's time to say goo'bye, It's time to say goo'bye,
Yes you heard me, goo'bye, goo'bye,
Okey let's go, today is D-day,
The day I will let me friends know, know how much I love them,
Do yourself a favour, show them, show them before it's to late,
before you fall apart, before there is no more,
no one can understand me, no one, not even myself,
because that's who I am, I go to the gym, I prepare, I gear up,
I fail, Oh ye I fail so hard, can't even pull that fucking dumbbell of ma' chest,
I flee, I run, I cry,
I'm loosing myself within me, my soul is a big, yes a big mystery,
But I sure know, I pee on all in this world,
Except Love, yes you heard me, love-e-e-e
The day you loose all your friends and family,
It's time to say good'ye, It's time to say goo'bye,
Yes you heard me, goo'bye, goo'bye,
Except Love, yes you heard me, love-e-e-e
The day you loose all your friends and family,
It's time to say goo'bye, It's time to say goo'bye,
Yes you heard me, goo'bye, goo'bye,
So hey, what would my life be without 'em,
My dear beloved friends, holy shit can't imagine,
But I sure know, the day will come when I loose 'em,
Fuck it fuck it all, dont even wann' think 'bout it,
Cause' then there is no more, I go home grabbin' a knife,
thinking for myself now it's enough, cuttin' myself to death,
Oh shit I'm bleeding as a fuck, whatever I dont have shit to live fo',
This might be the end, and it's what it is,
...
Goo'bye friends, Goo'bye this world.
ooooooooch vem fan lyssnar faktiskt på texten?
Jag brukar iaf lyssna på texten och försöka förstå innebörden..
Tycker låten blir bättre och den får en betydelse för mig då :)
Det ser ut att vara väldigt långa verser faktiskt. Vet faktiskt inte om det där passar att vara hiphop mannen.
HAHAHAHAHHAA
OT. Lyssnar inte på sånt skräp, sorri!
kikade runt lite och tycker inte det om jag ska vara ärlig.
#8 <3
#9 Får ta och göra det :)
#10 Gör jag inte det eller?
Sorry missförstod.