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To die alone
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Loggi is a pretty normal guy, but at least he wants to be normal. A few years ago something happened to him which changes his life forever. Loggi is on his way to school it’s a beautiful winter day, the snow is everywhere and the sun light is reflecting on it making the day even brighter. The road is shoveled and sanded to prevent people to slip. On the way to school Loggi meets up with his best friend Hayner. Hayner is pretty much always in a good mood and making other happy. Loggi and Hayner have been beast friends from the time of kindergarten on the way to school Loggi asks Hayner
- Yo Hayner
- Yeah?
- Have you done the homework, the one about the life after death?
- Oh! Was it today, I thought it was for next week
- Oh my god seriously you forgot about that!! You have too kept up your grades or else you know.
- I’m so fucked! What am I going to do now? I need a good excuse.
- Well you can always use “the dog ate my homework” HAHAHHHAHAHH
- Like that will work.
Just before they were going to enter the school Loggi says
- You know about the homework
- Yeah?
- It’s for next week; I was just messing with you.
- It’s for next week! Oh my fucking god I’m so going to kill you, that was so not funny
Loggi runs to the class with Hayner chasing him.


The rest of the day goes well for Loggi, he remember what his grandfather always said”that with a great start it always ends well”. After school Loggi is on his way to meets up with Hayner behind the basket court. Just as Hayner sees He waves with his hand and runs towards Loggi. Is he in hurry or something? Thinks Loggi. When Hayner approaches Loggi he says hurry come with me I will explain it on the way and drags Loggi with him. Hayner explains that Bella and Namine just seen a really scary movie last night.
- So what?
- Don’t get it? Says Hayner
- Get what?
- This is our chance to revenge on them.
- Oh yeah! I almost forgot about it
Loggi and Hayner hides beside some bushes beside the Basket court.
Bella and Namine have been best friend’s sense kindergarten just like Loggi and Hayner, and all fours of them have been in the same class for a very long time.
About a month ago Loggi and Hayner was in there favorite place “The Room” well it was more like a clean spot with bushes growing around it. Hayner and Loggi had made a bit more room and puts some old thrown away sofas and benches in it making it a bit nicer.
So Hayner and Loggi just seen “The Ring” and were just talking about, how it was and what really scared them. Suddenly two girls pops up from nowhere and the girls faces are covered with their hair and scares the shit out of both but Hayner get so scared that he pees himself.
- So this is it Says Hayner
- Yes!
- I’ve prepared some masks
Hayner takes out two masks from his backpack and gives one to Loggi. Both guys put them on together. They are going to be so scared says Hayner. Bella’s and Namine´s way home is through the basket court, Bella and Namine don’t suspect anything and goes through the basket court and out of nowhere both guys jumps up and screams
- AAAAAAH AAAAAH
Bella and Namine get so scared that they run around like confused puppies and baam! They run in to each other. Both Loggi and Hayner laughs so hard that both at the same time fall down on the ground
- Now we are even says Hayner laughing harder
Bella and Namine was still shaking and covering their foreheads because of the bumping together. When they release what happened they start to laugh to.
- Oh MY God Bella you should see your face It was priceless says Namine laughing
- You should see looked at your face I thought for a second that you were going pee and shit yourself says Bella
And everybody starts laughing.
Suddenly Loggi sees a shadow under a tree; it looks like some kind of an animal. NO! A human thinks Loggi. But one thing he is sure of is that it is the same thing he saw that day when it happened….


Loggi is a guy who never would hurt anyone, he is always clam and doesn’t care about what people thinks about him. But everything change when it happened….
The next day, Loggi is going home alone after school and thinking about that thing. What was that thing? Says Loggi out loud. Suddenly he feels that his hole back is ice cold and the feeling of that someone is watching him. He looks back over his shoulder but no one’s there. Strange, I haven’t felt like that before thinks Loggi. Suddenly he hears
- Looooggiiii wait up!!!
- Huh?
- Wait!!
Loggi turns around and sees Namine running towards him. What is Namine doing here? Thinks Loggi. Just as Namine is about reaching him she slips and falls down on Loggi and taking him down on to the ground with her, Namine is laying on Loggi and she blushes. Quickly they get up.
- S-Sorry Loggi Says Namine blushed
- It’s OK, I know it wasn’t your fault says Loggi with a big smile.
Namine blushes more
- Oh yeah? Why did you run after me? Says Loggi
- Well I was wondering if you wanted to drink some hot chocolates with me and Bella. Bella went to get Hayner and I went for you Says Namine with a big smile
- Yeah sure why not.
On the way to the café they don’t talk much, but just before arriving a car comes out of no were and tries to run over Loggi. Right before car was going to hit Loggi Namine pushes him out of the way and saving him. The car drives right in to a wall.
- Are you OK? Asks Namine
- Yes I’m fine, tanks for saving me says Loggi
Both were in shocking condition and they eagerly look for the car who tried to run over them. Loggi sees that “thing” again but still in the shadow of a tree covering itself in the darkness. Loggi feels how it’s laughing at him and showing its teeth. And when Loggi blinks it’s gone out of thin air. Namine was looking at the car and says:
- We should go and check if the driver is alive
- OK answers Loggi
When they near the car they see that the driver is unconscious bit breathing heavy. Drivers face and hands are cover in blood, dripping through the handle and on to the seat. Namine starts crying and Loggi hold her comfortably. He picks up his phone and dials 911.
- 911 What´s your emergency?
- Yes! There been a car crash
- Yes Where sir? What´s the name of the road.
Loggi looks around and sees the street sing, it said Staples road 26 to 48
- It’s on Staples road 26 to 48 says Loggi
- The police ant the ambulance will be there in ten minutes
- OK
- But sir what is your*click*
Loggi turns off the phone and puts it in his pocket and says to Namine who was still crying.
- Let’s get out of here!
Loggi takes Namine to the café where Bella and Namine were waiting. Hayner sees Namine Crying and asks:
- Why did you take so long time? What happened?
Loggi explains what happened but left the part about that thing untold.
The next Day, Loggi was trying to make this day just like any other normal day but nothing was normal. Nothing felt normal. Loggi is still feeling weird about what happen the other day; he was sitting on his bed and thinking about that thing. What does it want? Thinks Loggi. Suddenly the phones ring downstairs. Loggi mom’s picks up and hear what she is talking.
- Hello?
- Oh Hi Hayner, how are you feeling?
- Yeah Loggi told me what happened.
- I’m really glad that no one got hurt.
- He is really down; maybe you can cheer him up?
Loggi´s mum shouts after him
- Loggi it’s for you!!
- I´ll be there in a minute answer Loggi
Loggi goes downstairs and picks up the phone and hears Hayners voice.
- Hi buddy how are you feeling?
- I’m OK answers Loggi
- Good…… Well the circus is in town do you want to come with us?
- Who are us?
- Me,Bella and Namine
- Namine! Says Loggi
- Well?
- Yeah Ill come
They all meet up together and go to the circus. When they arrive at the circus they walk pass by a tent and some old women come out of it and says
- You there mister
- Me`? answers Loggi
- Yes can you please come with me in to the tent?
- Eeeh? OK says Loggi


All for goes in to the mysterious tent, it was filled weird stuff like old hair or fish eyes. Everybody was a bit unsure about this but not Loggi he knew this was something important something what will explain the dark creature. The old woman invites Loggi to sit down on a chair with a round table and at other side of the table sat the old woman. The old woman starts speaking:
- When you walked by I felt that something was not right so I looked out and that feeling came from you.
- Who are you? Asks Loggi
- I’m a medium.
Loggis friends who were standing behind him got shocked but not Loggi because he knew there was people who could contact spirits.
- S-so you can help me right? shouts Loggi
- Let me see what I can do. Now tell me did something happened a few years ago?
- How did you know?
- I felt that you were thinking about the past.
- Loggi what happened. shouts Hayner
- I think you should wait outside says Loggi
- No way man I have seen how you have been, something is really bothering you and I can’t stand it and I have waiting for you to tell me and now is the time I don’t care what you say I’m staying here with you!
- And so are we!! Says Bella and Namine
- I love you guys says Loggi with a tear dropping from the chin.
- Should we proceed? asks the old woman
Loggi start telling what happened that day.


- Yes! It was just as any night I was going back home from Hayner and felt some kind of claws touching my shoulder making it ice cold, I looked back but no one was there so I kept on walking.


- Then once again I felt that someone grabbed my left arm this time it felt like a hand but it was ice cold too just like the other one I looked back fast and saw some kind of an animal but it was gone in an instant.


- Then I saw this creature hiding behind the tree and I shouted, who is it!! The creature disappeared again. I got scared now and stood still like a statue I felt ice cold. I felt some breathing on my neck, I wanted to look back but I was too afraid.


- The breathing went from the neck and slowly moved to my ear and this creature was closer. I closed my eyes and wished that this was a really bad dream. Suddenly the breathing was gone but I was still afraid of opening my eyes, then I felt some claws slowly gripping my leg and pulled it so I fell on the ground and its start dragging me. I finally opened my eyes and saw something dark dragging me so I screamed, I screamed so aloud I could and that thing let go off my leg. I stand up terrified don’t know what to do so I start running home I ran the fastest I could and suddenly I stopped.


- Something was controlling my body. I was fighting back but it was too powerful I couldn’t do anything and it was making me to hit myself, it made me scratch, punch and slams my head against a tree.


- Suddenly it was all over and I ran home the fastest I could. And I never told anyone about it because thinking that no one will believe me.


All three friends hugged Loggi and said we believe you. Loggi looks at the old woman face she was out of breath, and was shocked she looked at Loggi for couple of minutes before speaking.
- Dear Child says woman
- Yes!
- I have to tell you that you are in great danger
- What! Why? Says Loggi
- I don’t know how you are alive but you have to fix this and the only way to do that is to find the grave and feel its pain and suffer then it will let go off you, I cannot tell you more and you have to go now.
The old woman pushes them out of the tent. Everyone is standing and saying nothing. Suddenly Loggi says
- I have to face that creature or it will hurt you guys too.
- But you can’t do that alone says Bella
- Yes I can I have to or it will kill me, I have to go don’t follow me
- No I’m coming with you Loggi says Hayner
Loggi gives him a deep look and Hayner takes at step backwards. Loggi walks away and Namine tries to run after But Hayner stop her and says:
- He has decided he will go alone, you need under to stand him!
Loggi starts running and the only place in his mind is “the Room”. When he arrives there he gets the feeling that someone is watching him so he shouts
- What do you want from me?
He comes in front of him.
- I want to help you! I want to feel your pain shouts Loggi
Suddenly something hits him in the head and he falls down on his knees. On the ground he see a boy
Who is getting tortured by someone, Loggi start feeling pain, he sees that this man is peeling off the boys nails and the blood is covering his whole hand, Loggi feels the same thing and he is bleeding from his finger tops. He sees that the man is burning him with a lighter on his forehead. And so does Loggi suddenly he sees the boy die because of all the torture and sees that the man buries him in the exact spot where he was. Loggi starts digging with his hand and not long after digging he sees an skeleton hand.
Loggi stands up and picks up the phone and calls the police and explains were the skeleton is and where it’s buried. After he is finished talking he start walking home, He hears the boy voice
- Thank you


The end

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