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Fladow the pirate king
Postat av xrey den 15 April 2008, 09:33
13 kommentarer · 206 träffar
Sha, hitta en berättelse i skolan vad tycker ni?
Han som skrivit den är 17 btw
"For a long time ago, there whose a man, he whose famous being the pirate king, and his name is Flame Shadow (Fladow is nickname). He even has a family a bottleful wife that whose the the queen over Pontycleia a cute boy, and when the boy who's born, Fladow get attested and look up, the day after he whose executed, his last word whose "I will give you my treasure, but you have to find it first. I hide it on Merde. But the only one that will haw it is my son, Swix" It has bean over 17 years now since that day now and the boy has grow to a man, a man whit a well built body and green sharp eye. "Com on! You can do it!" he shouts out to his friends (his name is Jeff) that stand on the other side of a cliff. "It is too far! I will never make it" he shouts back "yes you do! Just trust in your self!" Jeff clost his eye and did take a big breath, he walk an away and parped to take off over the cliff. he jump, he fly, and if it not was for Swix, Jeff would be on the bottom of the cliff now. "Man you must practise on jumping"
"haha..." he laugh with a sarcastic sound
Han som skrivit den är 17 btw
"For a long time ago, there whose a man, he whose famous being the pirate king, and his name is Flame Shadow (Fladow is nickname). He even has a family a bottleful wife that whose the the queen over Pontycleia a cute boy, and when the boy who's born, Fladow get attested and look up, the day after he whose executed, his last word whose "I will give you my treasure, but you have to find it first. I hide it on Merde. But the only one that will haw it is my son, Swix" It has bean over 17 years now since that day now and the boy has grow to a man, a man whit a well built body and green sharp eye. "Com on! You can do it!" he shouts out to his friends (his name is Jeff) that stand on the other side of a cliff. "It is too far! I will never make it" he shouts back "yes you do! Just trust in your self!" Jeff clost his eye and did take a big breath, he walk an away and parped to take off over the cliff. he jump, he fly, and if it not was for Swix, Jeff would be on the bottom of the cliff now. "Man you must practise on jumping"
"haha..." he laugh with a sarcastic sound
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